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Broken Mirror
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Broken Mirror |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk 
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Do you know what it’s like to feel be free cross the line between dreams or reality you see what I feel before I know myself holding the box containing the key to my heart And now I stand before a mirror framed in gold painted with watery waterfalls refreshing my image as it glows seeing myself as should of been before temptation lashed at me inside lays the broken child afraid to stand and talk amongst you all held down by voices that holds me back from those I desire Oh why don’t you join me in this mirror dearest even if death holds your name memories stand before my eyes let our broken children run wild together as we hold voices down in adulthood but in this life broken pieces fall and hide behind the world that lies smashed upon the floor no magic mirror holds you no mirror nomore I’ve walked the fine line across your beauty craved form touched all that you own been places we shared kisses but one place holds me the most hours spent lingering amongst flowers and a gravestone our child and you buried beneath my feet But beside me you sit I know I feel your hand upon mine and the baby crying in my mind I’ll never let go or leave you behind for I hold the box that once held me I now hold the key to let go still my grave will be next to yours dearest hand in hand we will stroll Along the heavens or in the ground choose believe or not believe For in the end hand in hand we will still stroll onwards Touching the hearts of the familys missed and missing us life does go on death is the rest we all wish and long |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautifully written poem. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"Along the heavens or in the ground choose believe or not believe For in the end hand in hand we will still stroll onwards Touching the hearts of the familys missed and missing us life does go on death is the rest we all wish and long" The depth of emotion expressed here is very heartfelt. Well done. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
excellant, very very good  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I couldn't have said it better |
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