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HopeS
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0 posted 2004-08-11 02:40 PM



Those Thoughts I Kept Alive

It was our source of sharing
Once it had led somewhere
I keep on returning back
Although getting nowhere

It was where hearts reached
Over the years grew to trust
I go back and reminisce
While dreams turn to dust

I recall the times in my mind
Where fond memories stay
I had always been hoping
You would return one day

Perhaps the time shall come
When you will remember me
Those thoughts I kept alive
For hope springs eternally

HopeĀ©2004

© Copyright 2004 HopeS - All Rights Reserved
Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2004-08-11 02:41 PM


open, honest, heart on sleeve writing Hope.

It was where hearts reached
Over the years grew to trust
I go back and reminisce
While dreams turn to dust

so poignant...heart hugs gal.


Earth Angel
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2 posted 2004-08-11 02:46 PM


Fond memories can keep us warm when days grow cold ~ but we must be careful that they don't keep us from making new ones.

A soft and wistful write, Dear Hope-full One



Linda
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miscellanea
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3 posted 2004-08-11 03:53 PM


Hope,
  It is good to read your poetry again.  I can relate to it at different time periods in my own.  It's so hard to let the precious moments of the past become the past. Always, when least expecting, new opportunities arise.    
misc'e

iliana
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4 posted 2004-08-12 01:12 AM


Hope does spring eternal, and you do express that well.   ....jo
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5 posted 2004-08-12 03:32 AM



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6 posted 2004-08-12 05:13 AM


sad but good


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