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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-08-10 09:54 AM



Summer's Expansion

Words have become my companion,
assisting me in living.

My intimate, confidant and familiar counterpart,
edging me towards that which seems so distant,
yet known to be within reach.

Whether a flame of thought
or a bright spot in my day,
those direct rays open me up,
licensing me to deviate from the past.

Muse me all you want,
you know who you are, reflecting
and building word dreams to add
to the mood of me...
when lost in thought.

M
inspired

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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LeeJ
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1 posted 2004-08-10 10:01 AM


Whether a flame of thought
or a bright spot in my day,
those direct rays open me up,
licensing me to deviate from the past.

and yeah, it's ok, to move forward, you've got a darn wise muse there with you...pretty terrific if you ask me, but then, whose asking....smiles and hugs...another good one to savor....

Cpat Hair
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2 posted 2004-08-10 10:18 AM


Textured
      silken words drift in soft rustle
along edges of darker lines
drawn by sun and played
in time against the rougher one
that sometimes
lie

Scratch them then
in burlap

or in softer cotton time

of lazy days with tea
          to pass the patterned trace
of word my friend

words upon a line



passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2004-08-10 12:36 PM


good write
iliana
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4 posted 2004-08-10 02:03 PM


Much enjoyed, Maureen....your muse does just FINE on its own!   ....jo
Sunshine
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5 posted 2004-08-10 06:21 PM


Inspired is right.  I so enjoy when poets hold hands and share with one another.  This is beautiful, Maureen!
hoot_owl_rn
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6 posted 2004-08-10 07:07 PM


How wonderful inspiration can be
Magnus
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7 posted 2004-08-10 08:21 PM


A pretty darn good inspire.  For sure.  Give
your muse a pat on the back....

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