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Lucie
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since 1999-06-20
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0 posted 2004-08-10 08:14 AM


Will I be able to write after your gone?

You've been the cause of years of ink found scribbled across whatever lies nearest.

You've been the heartache, the pain, the joy, the insane.
My strong, my weak, my outspoken and meek.
My laughter, my tears, my desires and fears.

Will I lose my words?
Will I lose my mind?

...I guess we'll see.

Remember me with a smile on your face, or please don't remember me at all.


© Copyright 2004 Lucille Dobbins - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2004-08-10 08:15 AM


sadly written and felt...sending hugs your way
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2004-08-10 08:17 PM


Emptiness is always filled...James
iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
3 posted 2004-08-11 03:53 AM


I know exactly what you mean.  The work I like the best (of my own stuff) has always come from the depth of relationships.  *hugs*...jo
passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2004-08-11 04:37 AM



Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
5 posted 2004-08-11 04:45 AM


There will be a bright new world for you to explore! ~ and write about! ~ but I do understand how you feel ~ I truly do, for I have been there myself! But now I can't stop writing about anything and everything and I am so full of life and new love! lol

Big hug,
Linda
Daisies

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