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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2004-08-10 07:19 AM


Friendship

A friend has passed a welcome bray
A sound and comment on the day
How fair are you this sunny dew?
The night is gone this morning’s coup

The field is wet the mist of morn
The flowers open to the dawn
Can you hear the morning’s fife?
Can you feel the awe of life?

Would you like to walk with me?
To raise your sail and sail this sea
To fly your mind into the sun
To race the clouds and have some fun

To make a palette of a sigh
Paint a rainbow in the sky
Beat the birds the early worm
Bring the day to full confirm

Blow your fife bow your cello
And do all this with just hello

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LeeJ
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1 posted 2004-08-10 07:22 AM


BEAUTIFUL...

Well in answer to your question, yes indeedy would love to sail the sea, but no can do, or after Randy got through with me, I'd be listening to my last rights...hehehehehe

But a lovely way to start the day, my dream is most definately, to sail the sea....someday perhaps...in the meantime, I'm diving back in for another read
see ya...
and thanks for and unforgettable 1st morning read!

serenity blaze
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2 posted 2004-08-10 07:28 AM


You are just such a delight.

"Would you like to walk with me?"

ABSOLUTELY.

I kinda sorta just did.

g'mornin' sweet sy...

Margherita
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3 posted 2004-08-10 07:31 AM


quote:
Can you feel the awe of life?



This IS the question!  You made me feel it even through your beautiful words.

And .... I feel like dancing on the waves of this blissful morning.

Thank you!

Love, Margherita

Sunshine
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4 posted 2004-08-10 07:48 AM


Can you hear the morning’s fife?
Can you feel the awe of life?

Would you like to walk with me?
To raise your sail and sail this sea

~*~

I thank each and every day
when I see a poem from you,
a steady teacup, and some brew
as pen in palm I walk your say.



Professor Gloom
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5 posted 2004-08-10 07:50 AM


Your writing shows you know friendship well

Gloom

Earth Angel
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6 posted 2004-08-10 08:48 AM


Mr. T., I absolutely LOVE this poem!!!!!!!!


I repeat, "I absolutely LOVE this poem!!!!!!!"

Have a glorious day! ~ and anyone who has you as a friend, is a fortunate person indeed!  Holding Hands

To love, Light ~ and friendships!
EA
Flowers

Gentle Spirit
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7 posted 2004-08-10 09:24 AM


Enjoyed much Sey, morning hugs.
Martie
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8 posted 2004-08-10 10:11 AM


Sy

Yes, yes, yes and YES!!  

Susan
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walking the surreal
9 posted 2004-08-10 10:26 AM


Ah, "hello" Sey and all that entails --

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Janet Marie
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10 posted 2004-08-10 10:46 AM


Can you hear the morning’s fife?
Can you feel the awe of life?

Would you like to walk with me?
To raise your sail and sail this sea
To fly your mind into the sun
To race the clouds and have some fun

To make a palette of a sigh
Paint a rainbow in the sky
Beat the birds the early worm
Bring the day to full confirm

Blow your fife bow your cello
And do all this with just hello

================================


HELLLLLLLOOOOOO !!


Would you like to walk with me?


YESSSSSSSSS !!!


you and me and Randy makes threeeee  

*winkiewinkie*



passing shadows
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displaced
11 posted 2004-08-10 12:32 PM


*big smile*
iliana
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12 posted 2004-08-10 02:06 PM


Hello, friend!  Much enjoyed this, Sy!   ....jo
Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2004-08-10 02:22 PM


LeeJ
Your comment gave me alot of pleasure. Hugs

serenity,
Good morning love, you are a love you know.

Margherita
Thanks for making me happy.

Sunshine
For you I do the impossible. I hug the sun

Professor,
Now that is a sunny comment.

Earth Angel
"To love, Light ~ and friendships" Thank you my Angel.

Gentle Spirit,
Thank you my sweet.

Martie,
Your yes makes me happy. Hugs

Susan,
You got the message. LOL

JM,
Just hop on Randy and he'll bring you right over.
WWRS

passing,
That's all it takes, a smile and a hello.

Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 2004-08-10 02:24 PM


iliana
And Hello to you my dear.

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