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MGROVES
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0 posted 2004-08-10 06:25 AM




if my heart
had wings
my soul
would sing
a song
free of pain
without tears
falling like rain
it would fly
and be free
to feel love,life
the way it should be






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Margherita
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1 posted 2004-08-10 06:33 AM


Soft beauty ....
Much enjoyed.
Your soul HAS wings, I doubt not.
Love, Margherita

MGROVES
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2 posted 2004-08-10 06:37 AM


thankyou


LeeJ
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3 posted 2004-08-10 08:04 AM


beautifully written and felt.


Earth Angel
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4 posted 2004-08-10 10:01 AM


Sending you some wings for your poetic heart!
Angel 3

Fly high! Fly free! May your soul be full of song!

EA
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Susan
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5 posted 2004-08-10 10:27 AM


May I join you upon your flight?  I just passed by a wing salesman this morning

Enjoyed this sweet longing of a write.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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6 posted 2004-08-10 12:22 PM


oh, one day you will fly and sing and live and love! and I'll be right there to applaud and cheer you on!
MGROVES
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7 posted 2004-08-10 02:21 PM


thanks so  much for replies, wings and all.


Ericc
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8 posted 2004-08-10 02:49 PM


Wow...!!!

Eric

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9 posted 2004-08-10 06:53 PM


I think you soar just fine
JamesMichael
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10 posted 2004-08-10 07:44 PM


Tell me about it...James
iliana
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11 posted 2004-08-11 10:18 PM


Mmmmmmmm, nice write; and me, too!   ....jo
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12 posted 2004-08-12 03:28 AM


sending you poetic friendship on a strong gust of wind, to help lift your wings to whatever altitude you wish to reach

MGROVES
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13 posted 2004-08-12 04:13 AM


thanks so much that must of been what i felt tonight  


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14 posted 2004-08-12 08:01 AM


beautiful written sentiment. Well done.
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