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HopeS
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0 posted 2004-08-10 05:37 AM



Would This Story Continue

The truth is never known
Fantasy hides the fact
Deviating from reality
How good you could act

Lines you crafted so well
Was a true work of art
Of scripted fantasies
You perfected every part

Masquerading in silence
Creating yourself anew
As the story continued
Where only fantasy grew

Dreams brought together
The love of me and you
You needed me then
I know that much was true

Would this story continue
You gave no indication
Is there another chapter
To my desired destination

HopeĀ©2004

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Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2004-08-10 06:11 AM


Your pen, dear Hope, questions beautifully. May your heart reveal the answers.
Your heart knows.
Love, Margherita

MGROVES
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california
2 posted 2004-08-10 06:28 AM


beautiful


LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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3 posted 2004-08-10 08:06 AM


questions we must ask ourselves and sometimes answer ourselves, as well....bittersweet write, but beautifully expressed.

Thank you for sharing

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
4 posted 2004-08-10 12:39 PM


I know how it feels

sending hearthugs

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2004-08-15 05:48 PM


Perhaps...but you might be writing a new book by then....James
Susan
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since 2004-03-27
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walking the surreal
6 posted 2004-08-15 05:58 PM


What a hard place to be, this place of uncertainty.  It is expressed well in this.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
7 posted 2004-08-15 08:03 PM


I believe in happy  endings...most of the time

wishing one for you

M

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