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And You Named It Passion To Care
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And You Named It Passion To Care |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
hey heard your new song on my radio I told you that tune would come together real soon from side A and side B of your mind the one that I grew to love blind anyway it’s times like this that I think I miss you then I find that I really miss me and maybe the crown that we pressed to our lips when pretending our royalty weak bridge It’s ok with me that you used my words at least now I know they’ll be heard soon you won’t need to beg door to door or even think about me oh, and speaking of door did I hear a bell and just when we’re having such fun Time to pack up that lost-in-you look in your eyes I think maybe you better run along. now. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Kahlil - a most moving piece here....used and abused and finally .... removed. I admire your viewpoint. Great write.  ....jo |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
oh, what a tune I'll be back later, to listen again |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Enjoyed this.  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
~ "it’s times like this that I think I miss you then I find that I really miss me" ~ "I think maybe you better run along. now." Sounds like you are marching to your own drum now! ~ and you are playing a magnificent wake-up tune! You rock! Loves 'n hugs, EA  |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Thanks, Linda, but what on Earth will I write about now, without all that great "inspiration"??? Just a joke! Just a joke! haha hugs, Angel you K |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Thanks everyone, for the sound check. K |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
enjoyed this much |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: ... and yet there is longing still. Beautiful write. Love, Margherita |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
very much enjoyed, to me this had the same beat, as some of Marc Anthoney's songs...or should be put to music I especially enjoyed your use of side A and Side B which is truely stated. Very well done |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms Kahlil...got your jabbies out kewl stuff here...crowned it ms K |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Very good, Kahlil...liked the beat of this a lot! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
this carries a tune all of its own, and I like it! Well done. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Great write! Eric |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I couldn't have said it better, you've said it all so well, Kahlil. There's alot to be said for killing em with kindness, and letting them go. Love it! |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
EVERYBODY! Thank you, so much! K Bluesy, I wish you'd click on my email.... |
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