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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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View if I waved would it move you for I can not make you feel as I do no more than the ocean can change breath of its salty kiss grains circle to gather surrounded to collect as a beach I am but eyes you are simply the view "i need a hand to help build up some kind of hope inside of me" TRAIN |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah.. some views are unforgettable... nicely done ma'am |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love the feeling in this one |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"I am but eyes you are simply the view" Enjoyed this, Helen.  |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
oh yes I loved this and the feeling it gave , wonderfully expressed Hope |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Mmmm hmmm~ The eyes have it, for without them we would miss the view that held them. Lovely Helen~ |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
my l@velife explained..urgh..hugs |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
sigh... |
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