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Farewell to a friend
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Farewell to a friend |
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MovesInSilence Member
since 2004-03-21
Posts 111Perth, Australia 
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Farewell to a friend we spent many late nights together together we traveled the country you sheltered me from the world and i full filled all your needs then that night our world was thrown into turmoil another stepped in our path another like you but misguided another ... you protected me you protected my friend you protected us from harm My friend My world my car ... you will be missed. It's not the blindfold that blinds you, |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I understand this fully, me too I have such a relationship with my car ... and in your case the farewell was evidently dramatic. Good write. Love, Margherita |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I'm hoping only the cars were damaged, and the occupants safe... such a scary time. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 understanding this well |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
i giggle at you *wince* *wink* LMAO i like this buddy, ya know? Bessie will be missed, god rest her rusted soul. LMAO |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
 Cute poem! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Hopefully all the occupants came out ok , although it is sad letting go of things that held many memories Hope hey nice to see another poet from Perth |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
RIP, wheels and all |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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