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As the Flowers Sing of Morning
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As the Flowers Sing of Morning |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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In this world that suspends now, i fall silent, a sleeping flower, yearning to dream you; the moon becomes my proxy, watching the nightsky though fading forlornly, as the rain takes her shadow, in tones that are fading, she strains, if to speak now, but is breathless, at a standstill a tear on the soaked sky; and i wonder if she saw you as the flowers sing of morning. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Stunning imagery Michelle... could feel the tears of morning TD |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"the moon becomes my proxy," I loved the poem, Michelle, and this one line.....just blew me away.  ....jo |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Inky...Nice work...:-) I am reminded what poetry does to me when I read a piece like this....compact, precise, well done.... IlianaJo I liked that line also, but this is the one that blew me away... "a tear on the soaked sky;" enjoyed --------ice ><> |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
"the moon becomes my proxy" "and I wonder if she saw you" IWIHWT.... Beautiful...just what we could expect from a goddess... K |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you write beautifully of nature |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
At writing poetry, you are a natural(ist)! This was especially poetic and beautiful, Dear Goddess of many things!   EA |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Beautiful! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Delightful! Totally after my own heart ... Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Soothing |
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Contabo Member
since 2001-11-21
Posts 159 |
as I read that, gymnopedie no.1 was playing in Winamp....what a beatiful combination. softly, Contabo |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
The was beautiful, my friend! jwesley |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
 thanks for stopping by |
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