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The Way of Hate
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The Way of Hate |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Way of Hate Watched the pain drops, drain the petals Fall upon the spines and nettles Crash and splash to pour and hoar Dissolve and trash forevermore The rain had washed away the lust Like wear that turns the stone to dust Drifting off into the air More than flesh and bone could bear Burning turning cooked in time Growing shoots of changing prime Fussing into something new The essence of a nature coup To watch a flower come and go And turn your eyes before it’s sew Deny the efforts of its life Is not to see or hear the fife The steps of hate are agony A waste of fates anatomy |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Mr. T. ~ One thing's for certain, you're not a hater! ~ you're a lover! lol  Another fine offering from your mighty quill! May your day ~ and life! ~ be full of love and may the head of hate never raise its ugly head! Angel love, EA  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel    What else can I say. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
See? That's why I stay away from hate, and if I must, just "dislike". You are on top of your form today...  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy "To watch a flower come and go And turn your eyes before it’s sew Deny the efforts of its life Is not to see or hear the fife" So true, my friend! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Thank you dear. Martie, Thank you sweety. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
The steps of hate are agony A waste of fates anatomy Too true. Would that all could know that hate is a bitter poison that kills the soul slowly and most painfully. Would not then compassion and love be a better brew? Enjoyed this wise write.  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Such a cancer is hate...It has no usefulness except to destory...what a waste of time and energy it is...You put it perfectly...A wonderful write.... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
To watch a flower come and go And turn your eyes before it’s sew Deny the efforts of its life Is not to see or hear the fife sigh...yes, indeed, to sometimes overlook and deny the perfection in it.... Good Morning Sy, once again you shower us with wise places |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Susan Absolutely. Startime55 You are right and thank you. LeeJ Thank you for your sweet reply. Good morning and have a nice week-end. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ You weigh the words so carefully then lay them on the page for all of us to see ... Your wisdom inks words to remember~ Thank you for being a poet~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Hate is a way of allowing ourselves to blame others for our own shortcomings... I know you don't harbor this feel. And I would bet you never will. Thank you Sir Sy.... |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
DON T I KNOW THIS ONE! i learned to always keep l ove in your heart never let hate fill it. thats why so much pain in mine now. i left a man so full of anger and hate. its a nightmare |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
This is probably really strange, but the poem made me think about driving these Houston road. People speed from traffic light to light. I usually go about the speed limit. Sometimes angry drivers tailgate or pass and snear at me.....in the end we almost always get to the red light at the same time. I think about all the hateful energy they project and where does it get them?....right beside me at the stop light! Loved the poem, Seymour. ....jo |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Enjoyed the read, though I'm not totally convinced that any emotion is wasted, even a negative one. "A spring shower was cause to run |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well done! |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Applause!! --------ice ><> |
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