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Beki
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0 posted 2004-08-06 09:59 AM



deep ocean silence -
black sea and starless sky
become one

© Copyright 2004 Rebecca Reese - All Rights Reserved
Susan
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walking the surreal
1 posted 2004-08-06 10:12 AM


very good, i feel this one.

Susan

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choshi
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2 posted 2004-08-06 11:22 AM


Beautiful Beki, you have me in the middle of the Sargasso Sea......~P
Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2004-08-06 11:44 AM


Beki
Good visual.

iliana
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4 posted 2004-08-06 04:21 PM


Thoroughly enjoyed this, Beki!  
Copperbell
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5 posted 2004-08-06 05:57 PM


me too
miscellanea
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6 posted 2004-08-06 07:43 PM


Beki,
  I could feel this... Enjoyed the silence.
            miscellanea
      

Sunshine
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7 posted 2004-08-06 07:47 PM


Bek...you are engaging a form of entrepreneurship that not many behold...

and oh so charming!

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8 posted 2004-08-06 08:44 PM


Beki~
I can actually 'see/sea' it~
BEAUTIFULLY executed~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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