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Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley

0 posted 2004-08-05 07:41 PM



I can’t stop smiling
As each day brings you closer to me
I long to touch you
Hold you in my hand
Caress your curves
With my trembling fingertips

Holding you close
I breathe in the
Scent that is only you
And sigh in
Satisfaction
Knowing there
Will be many pleasures
Now that you are here

Touching your back gently
I mark you as mine
No one can touch you
But me
And as I pull you in
I pray that you will take me
As far as I can go
For together
We are invincible
We are stronger together
Than apart
And I feel your strength
As it makes me
Bolder…

I am me
And you are my
Paycheck….

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Poet deVine
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1 posted 2004-08-05 07:42 PM


I am now gainfully employed and getting paid...after months of unemployment. Who knew there would be this much joy in a paycheck? LOL
Martie
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2 posted 2004-08-05 07:48 PM


Sharon

This is great!!  You are such a tease!  Congratulations!

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3 posted 2004-08-05 07:50 PM


LMAO...I was all ready to reply with some mushy sentiment.  Good one Ms. deV and thanks, I needed that...  
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4 posted 2004-08-05 07:51 PM


Hey Sharon, LOL, Don't I know it.

Thanks for the giggles.

Maree

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~Stevie Nicks~

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5 posted 2004-08-05 08:17 PM


Oh you kidder, you! Good to read your words again!


Corinne

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6 posted 2004-08-05 09:01 PM


And I thought this was about something else?

Boy,  where was my mind at?  Congrats on
the paycheck....They are nice to have,
aren't they?

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7 posted 2004-08-06 01:26 AM


Congrats on the job -- this was a really fun poem.   ....jo
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9 posted 2004-08-06 07:33 AM


Sharon...Somehow I just knew this would have a twist too it. Enjoyed very much. Congrats on the job and glad the goose layed you a golden egg...Paul

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Paul

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10 posted 2004-08-06 07:48 PM


and there's my girl! smiling achoo through the screen--go buy yourself a treat, my friend, and know that whatever it is, you deserve that and more!


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11 posted 2004-08-06 10:56 PM


Ah, the joy of a FICA deduction.... I'm jealous!!     Congrats Sharon -- it's good to read you again.
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12 posted 2004-08-06 11:27 PM


And didn't you forget to mention that you LOVE the job, and they love you back?  Next thing you will be telling us is that you are picking out curtains
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13 posted 2004-08-13 03:24 PM


ROFLMAO... I'll admit I take mine for granted and never quite look at it like this. *G* Of course... I have to get out the magnifying lens TO look at it??? *G*

I thoroughly enjoyed this, PDV... Congratulations! *S*

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14 posted 2004-08-13 03:26 PM


Congratulations and you delight us with this wonderful read. Hard to beleive a job can be good for the muse huh?     Well done.
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15 posted 2004-08-13 03:27 PM


BE SAFE! then spend that paycheck and buy yourself a huge treat!
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16 posted 2004-08-13 05:36 PM


DeVine one....I love you and your work....it's almost always refreshing in some way or another..you are one of my favorites.....
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17 posted 2004-08-13 06:05 PM


nice read
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18 posted 2004-08-13 06:09 PM


LoL nice ending...
good write

"UH de nah nah nah..."

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