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Endlessecho
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since 2003-09-05
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I live within myself

0 posted 2004-08-05 03:17 PM


Grape flavored candy turns my mouth a shocking purple.
I purse my lips and stare into the mirror.  
Stick out my tongue to show the color even more
And then quickly hide it back inside.
My smile widens – grape flavored and violet colored.

I look at my eyes in the mirror – look into my eyes.
Hazel green and ringed with brown.  
Sometimes if I’m in a certain light
They have a purple hue as well.  
I try to match my eyes to my tongue.  

Wagging my head, I dance to the music.
I turn in front of the mirror.
No charade to keep up.  
No need to pay attention to how I dance
Or what I’m wearing
Or if the candy is making grape flavored,
Purple tinged drool lines down my chin.

I look at myself and simply grin.



© Copyright 2004 Endlessecho - All Rights Reserved
Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
1 posted 2004-08-05 07:23 PM


These moments, when one is oneself without regard for what may be interpreted, they are most wonderful.  I really enjoyed sharing such a moment with you.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2004-08-06 12:14 PM


Enjoyed...James
iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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USA
3 posted 2004-08-06 01:19 AM


Endlessecho -- I really liked this poem of abandon -- made me grin, too!  Clicking library.
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