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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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0 posted 2004-08-13 10:28 AM


Even tones fossilized
With conflicted one
Where a sparrow cries
Verse writers of the sky
To hour glass elaborate music
Parallel couplets
Playbill a museum of
Global fire sacred
On a stone tablet forest
Neither hot in summer
Or cold in winter
Cloaked in clouds of fog
Famous scenic spots of great cobbled streets
Leg wrappings & jewelry
Humble currents of long centenarians
Backpacking in cushioned grasslands
Red carpets & bright lanterns
Strolling intimate summits
Halfway points of husbandry
Drinking the bouillabaisse of sewing kits
While fingers trace the ancients
Embarking on a captivating star six river pass
Mingling the water of what is
To what was…complimenting defects
Submissive couplet


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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2004-08-15 01:29 AM


James must not have seen this one,
but I did. You are a real friend, Lee, always making connections and offering  warm hugs.

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
2 posted 2004-08-15 01:33 AM


Great write, LeeJ!  
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2004-08-15 02:54 AM


I"m sure he'll love this!
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2004-08-15 05:18 PM


Silky...a pleasue to read...thank you Lee J...James
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