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A Wave
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A Wave |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Such a small motion... A wave before the final turn of your goodbye. And the night is split by the intimate grace of your hand. There are two sides to my infinity. To suffer in your absence...and this longing that binds us in the confines of forever. Such a small motion... A wave on the edge of infinity. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ericc But a concious wave. Enjoyed |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
There are two sides to my infinity. ~*~ And if we are fortunate, sometimes we splinter into more. Always an enjoyable read, your words. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
You have such an amazing talent Eric! Well done once again! Hugs~ ~ Those who complain the sun has gone out of their world |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I agree with Nancy! I know I'm always in for a sigh when I read your words.  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Endlessecho Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 398I live within myself |
"And the night is split by the intimate grace of your hand." What an intimate, interesting look at a wave. Beautiful write! |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
A gesture, seemingly insignificant and largely ignored by most... and you, you see the deeper, beautiful meaning held in such a gentle movement. There is wisdom and beauty in all things. How beautiful... thanks for sharing. I love you, Moca |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Very well said Eric....a wave has such strength and power to it, though being so subtle and short an expression. Many a tear has walked away with the sight of a wave enduring with one's mind. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Eric - you've gotten to writing more beautifully each time I read you.. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Eric, Especially liked your last line, "a wave on its way to infinity"! A wonderful interpretation... miscellanea |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Okay -- now, you take my breath away! So romantic! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Yes, I feel it....more like a tidal wave.. ~ARH  "The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched.They must be felt with the heart."~Helen Keller (1880-1968) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ooooooo...wow |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Much enjoyed the gentle roll and brilliant white water. I hope you find your peace between the tides, and rise above. Lovely poem, Ericc~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You are the infinity beckoning from every star and I move within your confines mixing tears and smiles in the quiet knowing that the final gift of the night will be the splendour of dawn with its embrace of light. That little gesture was very inspiring. So very beautiful! I love you. Margherita  |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Excellent Poetry Enjoyed reading this. Short lines that have not lost their long armed punch.....:-) --------ice ><> |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
Pimpin and panderin, on a level you can't serve, dismantle, nouns, pronouns, adverbs, and verbs |
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