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Decaflame
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0 posted 2004-08-05 09:40 AM



F.F. split/divides P.S.

She/they/them skipper sounds like
well worn capes,
voices clamor echoes appeal
inside of want to cry, “come give me…”

tapped and taping random thoughts,
she drums her toe, sips her joe
irate, her eyes from seeking ground
where lovers once laid like clowns around,
as echoes come, “where are you…”

and there was never calm of life,
ever wired, useless wife,
talent exploited, what talent there was
only the crazies know what caused
though P.S. always felt sinside
that F.F. knew she would abide
come voices clamor echoes appeal

together they cry, “come give me…”

real.

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miscellanea
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1 posted 2004-08-05 09:44 AM


Powerful write, Decaflame!  Enjoyed this a bunch.
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2 posted 2004-08-05 09:46 AM


Wow! Just Wow!

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Martie
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3 posted 2004-08-05 10:10 AM


Deca....I think I'd like to echo Ed's "wow".  WOW!
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dang
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5 posted 2004-08-05 05:51 PM


69 or 70 cards
shuffle and deal
playing for caddy's
and waterfalls

such images in here ms

enjoyed it
thanks for the wave

Decaflame
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6 posted 2004-08-06 08:53 AM


Sometimes the caddy gets the tips,
but the waterfalls always steal the show...
thanks, DS...

Dixie, yea, me too...

Rat, thanks for not saying MoM!

Martie, always a hug for you...

Misc'e...it's just real.  

iliana
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7 posted 2004-08-12 01:27 AM


  Great poem.
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8 posted 2004-08-12 01:32 AM


another wow! really good


kayjay
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9 posted 2004-08-12 08:25 AM


The tale between the lines
Shows the woe inside.
Sometimes our stressed minds
Simply can't abide.

Nicely done.  KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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10 posted 2004-08-12 08:30 AM


very nicely done!
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11 posted 2004-08-31 12:57 PM


Decaflame,
  Just had to come back to this!  It says so much, breathing emotion and reality in bits and pieces, the way it always seems to fall!  Now that I've had a taste of your work, you can bank on it that I'll be back.

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12 posted 2004-08-31 01:36 PM


tapped and taping random thoughts,
she drums her toe, sips her joe
irate, her eyes from seeking ground
where lovers once laid like clowns around,
as echoes come, “where are you…”

and there was never calm of life,
ever wired, useless wife,
talent exploited, what talent there was
only the crazies know what caused
though P.S. always felt sinside
that F.F. knew she would abide
come voices clamor echoes appeal

together they cry, “come give me…”

real.
YES!  OH YES!!!!!!  You have no idea how this hits home......


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