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Snowflake From Hell
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since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

0 posted 2004-08-05 09:34 AM

In my mind,
You're all I find.
In my heart,
Something new about to start.
Captured in my soul,
You've made me feel whole.
I am pure I am true,
I am ALL over you.
In my eyes,
You'll see no lies.
On my lips,
Hear loving encouraging tips.
On my touch,
Feel no pain of any such.
With each breath I take,
No more mistakes I'll make.
Every word softly spoken,
Hearts not to be broken.
What is this that lies within me?
I'm sure you can see.
YOU are...
What lies within.

Victims....aren't we all?

© Copyright 2004 Kyle - All Rights Reserved

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

1 posted 2004-08-05 09:44 AM

Hot Flakes, you wear love exceedingly well!!!

That was downright l-o-v-e-r-l-y!!!

You sound so happy! ~ and I am happy for you!

Warm hugs and a big smile,
EA

Copperbell
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since 2003-11-08

Posts 956

2 posted 2004-08-05 10:25 AM

very upbeat...good to hear you speaking positively

passing shadows
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displaced

3 posted 2004-08-05 12:43 PM

so romantic!

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

4 posted 2004-08-05 07:27 PM

Ah, love, what sweet rhyme it makes.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

froggy
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since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

5 posted 2004-08-06 10:50 PM

All I can say is beautiful,wow

:-)

MGROVES

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california

6 posted 2004-08-07 07:05 AM

wow

this was sooo beautiful

Paula Finn
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missouri

7 posted 2004-08-25 01:16 PM

Somebody new boyo?

Midnitesun

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Gaia

8 posted 2004-08-25 01:39 PM

smiling
what lies within is showing on the outside

SEA

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with you

9 posted 2004-08-25 01:43 PM

very very nice

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

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10 posted 2004-08-25 01:44 PM

*Smiling* Lovely, inside and out!

Copperbell
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since 2003-11-08

Posts 956

11 posted 2004-08-25 08:12 PM

reading it again - brings a smile for you

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