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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-08-05 08:34 AM


long legged sleepless
had the meadow on
in my window

and the curtains
were bare foot
mudless white lace

shimmer skin sinner
with a halo
soprano silent singing

I kissed your hands
as you pushed the remote
and made the day turn

into some lover's night
with permission
to be wicked again

you stole my out worn virginity
_________
Dark

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Decaflame
Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635

1 posted 2004-08-05 08:38 AM


This is no coast with the most poem...
this is a middle of the fields cornstalk seem
where veils are left behind in dreams...

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2004-08-05 08:41 AM


I kissed your hands
as you pushed the remote
and made the day turn

you forgot to mention, the ceiling fan, in a very beautiful cottage along the sea, somewhere remote...wishing you both the best...love, warmth, patience, understanding...and a life filled with happiness forever!  Smiles and hugs...good one!

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
3 posted 2004-08-05 09:04 AM


  Oh this was nice indeed!!!  

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Decaflame
Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635

4 posted 2004-08-05 09:07 AM


Now you've gone and inspired.
Sheesh...

Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
5 posted 2004-08-05 10:32 AM


Good moroning, DS

What a nice view!!  

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
6 posted 2004-08-05 12:49 PM


does that remote work for rewind?
Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
7 posted 2004-08-05 02:53 PM


Of course you left me smiling and thinking . . . mwahaha, watch those wicked thoughts!

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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