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the Icing on the Cake (humorous slice of life during a sad time)
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the Icing on the Cake (humorous slice of life during a sad time) |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
When sadness boiled over Condensing water upon pot lid He put the timer on humor, Instigating the evil trick we did You’d have to know my cooking The burning, alarming smell To fathom how we pulled it off This caper, oh so well. The charring of my toast, The blackening of the sausage The pancakes on the ceiling From slightly over-tossing The perfect wilt of a salad, The wondrous pudding drip Oh, really my cookings not that bad! When eating, remember one thing Just keep closed your lips! With the background you now have I’ll tell you all the rest; My father died in August, My mother, very sad. The day of her birthday was Timed near his death; How could we light Dampened candles? It simply didn’t have the luminous effect. My rainbow friend took care of that. At his cleverness I have to laugh! He handed me a recipe For most delicious icing; In his hand he held the key, Styrofoam, to be iced--so enticing (much better than my bake!) My mother was ever so pleased to see my sacrifice She knew my detest for cooking Knowing, in love the cake was made! When we lit the candles Her eyes, in tear, held my fathers space. For a flaming instant, we fell Within her deadening eyes, Praying that she, at first, Wouldn’t notice our cake’s disguise. (oh, yes, we had taken every measure rounding styrofoam corners, making lumps, removing all perfection, putting in place every bump!) As we handed her the knife, We had a little impish in our eyes, But she missed it… With grace, she tried to chisel And chisel, Politely chisel The styrofoam in hide. When she saw our caper, life invaded her face. This just goes to show Humor goes a long, longg ways. (My mother knew this cake had to be real because she saw me making the real, identical one by scratch. Believe it or not, it was yummy!) [This message has been edited by miscellanea (08-06-2004 09:25 AM).] |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Humor, the emotion with long legs Wonderful story |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Thanks, Lee J. It was a sad, sad time, but my rainbow friend lived the philosophy, "If life gives you lemons, make lemonade." We were so blessed to have had him in our lives for a while. He was a good teacher, much better than I am a learner! Thanks for your comment, Lee J. It made me linger just a while longer in those memories. misc'e |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
When she saw our caper, life invaded her face. This just goes to show Humor goes a long, longg ways. ~*~ I know the tear of tear in up-down days of fear and cheer, and I approve this poem's delight to bring again a heart to light. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Decaflame, Thank you so much for your poetic reply. It said so much. Thanks again, miscellanea |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Very cute! "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Glad you liked it, Susan. I spent the night at my Mom's last night, thinking of old times. Thanks for reading. miscellanea |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
...and I say yes, make lemonade and when it's nice and cold, throw it in Life's face and tell Life to get its soggy bleep back to the store and bring you what's on the list..... ...which is a saying I didn't originate, but I love it even though it ain't nearly as amusing as this poem! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> ______________Ratleader______________ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
miscellanea "life invaded her face." You have a gift...thanks for sharing it with me this morning! It was yummy!  |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Ratleader, Martie, Thanks for you kind responses. Have a good day. It looks like it's going to be a beautiful sunny one here--hoping you get the same. miscellanea |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
 to    EA |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Earth Angel, I can hardly stop laughing! Your graphics fit this so well!!! Too funny, Lady! Too funny! miscellanea |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you are precious...just precious |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
double ditto thoughts of you, Dixie!!! You made my day, Sweet One. miscellanea |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Great write! Eric |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Eric, I'm glad it was enjoyable. Thanks for stopping by. Have a good day... miscellanea |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
oh how cute and sweet your little prank was! you know someone loves you when they can make you smile even through the hardest of memories....thanks for sharing this! |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
muted, What a nice reply. I won't take the credit-the idea was my friend's. Once in a while I think back and really miss the invention of his mind. There are such unique people in the world, such as yourself. It's good to hear from you again. miscellanea |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I don't quite know what to say about this one since this brings back so many memories, except that it was very sweet. ....jo |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Jo, You needn't say anything. I spent that night at mom's house, and a muse just came to mind. It was a nice visit. cathy |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Vandana, Thank you for your kindness. Have a great weekend, vandana, miscellanea |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Hugs Sadie, TD |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
TD, Hugs I gladly accept and am sending a few back. Thanks, TD. miscellanea |
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