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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2004-08-05 07:17 AM


Your Face

My fingers read your face by Braille
And sink in thoughts below the Vail
I know in time that thorns will bear
But in my love I do not care.

There is a force that leads me on
It stays with me and never gone
It plays the strings within my heart
Hypnotic is the songs impart

And I am quote unquote the mark
That sees the rainbow of the arc
And follows the road to utter muse
Trying to watch my P’s and Q’s

And there beyond horizons last
I see the vision of the cast
Not in coinage of the realm
But apparitions overwhelm

And in this netting we are caught
Until we reach our final port.


© Copyright 2004 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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1 posted 2004-08-05 07:19 AM


Hiya Sy, good morning to ya
how are you doing today
wishing you and your family well

No matter what, where and when
the goodness of your heart prevails
nothing more nothing less
and yet, worth a million

Your a peach!

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2004-08-05 07:28 AM


LeeJ
Good morning sweet, I think your a peach too.

Sunshine
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3 posted 2004-08-05 08:32 AM


And I am quote unquote the mark
That sees the rainbow of the arc
And follows the road to utter muse
Trying to watch my P’s and Q’s

~*~

I think your muse is sputterin'
perhaps he's even stutterin'
at the ease by which you write
keeping times both dark and light...



Good morning, our Sy!

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2004-08-05 08:39 AM


master sy
seascape date
with tie downs
and flowers...
nice touch guy!!

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2004-08-05 08:57 AM


Sunshine
Good morning,

Dark,
Thanks for the read and reply guy.

Earth Angel
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6 posted 2004-08-05 09:39 AM


"My fingers read your face by Braille
And sink in thoughts below the Vail
I know in time that thorns will bear
But in my love I do not care."

~ I cannot adequately express, how truly touching I found those words to be. You, dear Poet, have a very beautiful Face ~ within and without.

May a rainbow be your crown,
EA

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7 posted 2004-08-05 12:52 PM


nice write
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8 posted 2004-08-05 01:33 PM


Hey you can read me in braille you cute dragon you!  Opps, don't let that Isabel read this, she will be after me with her broom!

Sir, you will indeed be caught in net, until the end of time I bet.

miscellanea
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9 posted 2004-08-05 01:54 PM


Enjoyed today's poem; have a good day, Sy.
                 misc'e

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10 posted 2004-08-05 01:58 PM


Beautifuly lyrical...!

Eric

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2004-08-05 02:10 PM


Sharon,
I won't let her see this.

miscellanea
Enjoyed your reply. hugs

Ericc
Thank you my friend.

Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 2004-08-05 02:13 PM


Earth Angel
And you are the sweetest Angel I know.


Dark,
I knew you would understand.

iliana
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13 posted 2004-08-06 03:02 AM


"And I am quote unquote the mark
That sees the rainbow of the arc
And follows the road to utter muse
Trying to watch my P’s and Q’s"

Understood and appreciated!   ...jo

Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 2004-08-06 07:25 AM


iliana
Thank you,

Endlessecho
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15 posted 2004-08-06 04:53 PM


Beautiful..
Suetang
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16 posted 2004-08-06 05:49 PM


A wonderful piece of writing here Seymour that was so very much enjoyed.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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17 posted 2004-08-06 06:57 PM


nice read
Seymour Tabin
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18 posted 2004-08-06 07:54 PM


Endlessecho
Thank you for the beautiful.

Suetang
Thank you so much for the read and reply.

vandana
Thank you dear.

Margherita
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19 posted 2004-08-06 08:33 PM


quote:
There is a force that leads me on
It stays with me and never gone
It plays the strings within my heart
Hypnotic is the songs impart




So beautiful! That force ... is Love!
Love, Margherita

Seymour Tabin
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20 posted 2004-08-06 09:27 PM


Margherita
Yes it is, thank you.

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21 posted 2004-08-13 03:20 PM


My fingers read your face by Braille
And sink in thoughts below the Vail
I know in time that thorns will bear
But in my love I do not care.

I can't begin to tell you how this touched me... but oh... how it did! *S*

But it's more than a trigger to a special memory... it's a beautiful work... Excellent!

Seymour Tabin
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22 posted 2004-08-13 03:28 PM


suthern
Once again you made my day, thank you sweet.


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