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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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I watch and listen being neither here nor there, anymore. Shutting down what was for now, letting what isn't take over. Not good at pretending, I hear an emptiness and feel each breath you took from me. But time shouldn't be all we have, as I watch you coming towards me and sometimes enjoy the anticipation a bit too much, "the lacking of " setting things back. It doesn't matter that you don't understand me, or that our needs are not the same, because I have stopped looking for the opening of that door. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Your words slips so easily on my tongue as if the words have rested there at another time. I feel your writing so deeply. It has the capacity to set my mood for the rest of the day! I sure hope sun comes out, just right, with a comfortable temperature! Have a good day misc'e |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Mornin' M!  enjoyed. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gawd! you said it! that last verse hits home so hard for me...wow |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
hugs Ms M... |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
So poignantly beautiful. Eric |
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