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Open Poetry #33

Living In Sorrow

mrmojorisin5908
Member

since 2004-05-03

Posts 103
Colorado

0 posted 2004-08-04 04:05 PM

Oh how many times...
Have I seen your pretty blue eyes
And all I want to do is still be with you

Living in sorrow
Thinking of tomorrow
I cannot think of you!
I will not be with you!
I have seen day, I have seen night
But bein with you is a terrible sight

The time is here
To halt our love
Let's just be courtly
Or avoid most admirably
Because I don't want you
I don't want you any more

Walking away from pain
Does no good, it just kills
Just Kills
The thrills are gone
I want you banned for eternity
The extremity of lust

Andrew A.
"The road of excess leads to the palace of wisdom." - William Blake

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2004-08-04 06:56 PM

sounds like someone has gotten to your heart

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2004-08-06 12:04 PM

Nice writing....hope you get past the sorrow...James

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

3 posted 2004-08-06 12:41 PM

wow very nice expressive I love it,I know how you feel.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2004-08-06 12:53 PM

Have to go along with what Midnightsun said. That's the impression this poem leaves. Good luck....passion usually wins out.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-08-06 02:33 AM

I relate

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