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Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

0 posted 2004-08-04 09:19 AM

It’s this way

Mind’s eye, centered,
Envisioning motions to be
Clarity streamlined, mentally,
I will move you

However,

Recollection, vibrations,
Senses overtaking all experienced,
Streamlining emotions
When you moved me.

~*~

Yes.

Everything I imagined
Has
Recollections trembling

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

1 posted 2004-08-04 09:30 AM

ms Deca, would think that you moving
would be a dance of delight
a dance of veils
with lights behind

enjoyed this ms

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2004-08-04 10:03 AM

Wonderful Deca. I now have a section in my library just for you! hugs, Chrislane

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."

— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

3 posted 2004-08-04 10:32 AM

Deca

One, so sure and purposeful, the other, fragile as stained glass in an earthquake. Yes, that is the way it is to tremble and not break.

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

4 posted 2004-08-04 10:56 AM

Very nice read.

JL

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-08-04 12:28 PM

much enjoyed

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

6 posted 2004-08-05 08:47 AM

Hey Dixie...I do believe you read everyone. Thank you sweetheart.

JL, always a pleasure to see your initials.

Martie, your comments always please, thank you.

Ah Nightshade...don't make me blush. I'll drop my pen.

DS, if you enjoyed, then so did I.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

7 posted 2004-08-06 01:31 AM

Decaflame -- this moved me, too! Gorgeous words spilled here.

....jo

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2004-08-06 02:15 AM

yeah I do read everyone, mostly...but I comment when it's good...there are some I miss now and then, but glad I didn't miss this one

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

9 posted 2004-08-06 08:48 AM

Dixie, me, too.

Jo...bless your heart, girl. Thank you!

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