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RedStoneEB
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since 2003-06-08
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0 posted 2004-08-04 06:21 AM



Your very superstitious
Got no friends at all
Turned me on my best friends
Bad luck broke the safety walls

You know what you’ve done to me
Killed my life and gave to me
Broken mirror on the safety walls
Seven years bad luck slowly began to fall

Now very superstitious
Got no friends at all
Turned you on your best friends
Bad luck broke the safety walls

Now you know what you’ve done to me
Cos I done to you what you did to me
Broke the mirror on your safety wall
Seven years bad luck slowly began to fall

Both very superstitious
We’ve got no friends at all
Both turned on our best friends
Bad look broke the safety walls

Now all we can do is run and hide
And watch our backs as we fade in time
Bringing superstition to every living soul
Losing all their best friends
Bad luck broke the safety walls

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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2004-08-04 07:07 AM


well, your luck will change if you do believe

hugs

very well done, but sadly felt

MGROVES
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2 posted 2004-08-04 07:10 AM


you can change your luck   good write


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