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Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa

0 posted 2004-08-04 03:35 AM


It’s not the usual love sick blues
(I passed that stage some years ago)
or even once the blue of moon
the cause of shadows cast
from time’s dividing line.

It’s not the usual missing you
(I’ve got the t-shirt, maybe two)
or even once a gentle breeze  
the cause of thunder storms  
in a clear blue sky.    

It’s not the usual soul distress
(I’m dressed up for reality)
or even once a love suppressed  
the cause of aching bones
from happenings unknown.

It’s not the usual feel of me
(I’ve known myself these many years)
or even once a want and need
the cause of deep despair  
in my comfort zone.      

It’s simply not the usual
and the unusual isn’t simply
a still life photographic shot
staring back at me
but an assembly line
of emotive parts
moving to conclusions
I simply cannot make.


© Copyright 2004 Helen - All Rights Reserved
iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
1 posted 2004-08-04 04:04 AM


Helen, this one reaches beyond the usual, that's for sure.  That last verse....oh, I just want to reach on other the ocean and give you a great big hug.  Take care of you.   .....jo
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2004-08-04 04:34 AM


hugs to you
Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
3 posted 2004-08-04 05:01 AM


Hi Jo and Dixie - Hugs are my favourite things in life - thanks.  I am really quite fine - it's just that there's something unusual going on somewhere or other and I'm damned if I know what it is.  
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