navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #33 » hey pretty
Open Poetry #33
Post A Reply Post New Topic hey pretty Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Snow
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2004-08-04 02:59 AM



note: if you, the innocent reader, understand this next piece, then you should RUN, now!! Save yourself.... for you have now entered the....


snoooooooooooooooow zone


heehee... yeah a little dramatic, but serious. *eg* my madness is my company..... save yourself.


hey pretty

milk toast whispers
soggy reminders
poe, she sings of my
garbage disposal banquet
vomit encrusted desires
destinations unreachable
my voice; silenced
gravel pit graveyard
  s
  l   i
   d
e
to the long
undesired coupling
and i'm so far gone
there's no rescue
face to the stone
dancing with the wicked side
i stroked one more
scream up
s t o p !
the wall switch is about to blow
and this is the last spin before
my obsession
is your downfall
           milk toast; once
tyger stripped
now....5 and 1/2 seconds
away from being sybil's
lip balm
R U N ~ !


©snow



"Kind words can be short and easy to speak, but their echoes are truly endless."
--Mother Teresa

© Copyright 2004 Snow - All Rights Reserved
iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
1 posted 2004-08-04 03:07 AM


Yep, that's pretty deep and maybe beyond my grasp?....very spooky this time and very creative with the imagery, though, I at least caught that.  You must be in a pretty strange mood tonight. Did you just see the exorcist? lol
BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
2 posted 2004-08-04 03:12 AM


I'm glad I'm not the only one, and just so you know, I aint running no where.

I truly enjoy your vivacious nature, Snow~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2004-08-04 04:41 AM


I love reading whatever mood you're in
JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
4 posted 2004-08-04 11:19 AM


Wow!  I hope not to meet this personality in a dark alley!  Scary!!

Did enjoy, but now I'm looking over my shoulder.

JL

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
5 posted 2004-08-04 11:27 AM


You cracked me up, my pretty! Insanity becomes you! lol I think I'll try it some time!

Loves 'n Laughs,
EA

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279

6 posted 2004-08-05 01:21 AM


Hi Snow. I love this. Absolutely love it. Sorry I haven't e-mailed you in days. Yahoo keeps bumping my replys back to my account saying it can't find your address. It is drivng me nuts. I might have to switch to a new account. Hugs...missing you.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

aujussy wolf
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Senior Member
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215
Michigan
7 posted 2004-08-05 06:56 PM


and this is the last spin before
my obsession
is your downfall

____________________________________

some killer lines snowster ...cavernous indeed .....I like it wild style



JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
8 posted 2004-08-06 12:15 PM


Like this...James
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #33 » hey pretty

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary