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Suetang
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0 posted 2004-08-03 11:23 PM



Picture by Josephine Wall

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Don't let my looks deceive you
I may not be a work of art
But I have something of importance
A kind and loving heart

I may not have untold riches
Or a bountiful chest of treasure
But the love within my heart
Is quite simply beyond measure

To find a person's beauty
You must look deep inside
For within the heart and soul
Is where love will reside

You can't really judge a person
By their color or their race
You must delve a little deeper
And look beyond their face

No one of us is perfect
That's what makes us all unique
The positives, not the negatives
Is what we all should seek

So set yourself a challenge
To bring a smile to someone's face
Allow your heart to project love
This gift of life we must embrace


I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2004 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
iliana
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1 posted 2004-08-03 11:50 PM


Suetang, this is so true.  Beautifully penned!   .....jo
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2 posted 2004-08-04 12:01 PM


To find a person's beauty
You must look deep inside
For within the heart and soul
Is where love will reside


Wow, this is wonderful Sue. You are always such a pleasure to read. hugs, Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."


— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet

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3 posted 2004-08-04 04:51 AM


so beautiful  so true


LeeJ
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4 posted 2004-08-04 07:16 AM


Don't let my looks deceive you
I may not be a work of art
But I have something of importance
A kind and loving heart


Well, I beg to differ, your looks are as
beautiful and wondrous as your entire being
you float lovely visuals past our journey
thank you

Susan
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5 posted 2004-08-04 10:20 AM


Wise, wise words, and very prettily said to boot!

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

JL
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6 posted 2004-08-04 11:07 AM


Such a wonderful message:
“This gift of life we must embrace”

Great write!
JL



Earth Angel
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7 posted 2004-08-04 11:37 AM


"So set yourself a challenge
To bring a smile to someone's face
Allow your heart to project love
This gift of life we must embrace"

~ Well, my Dear Sweet Sue, you just met such a challenge!!!

Lovely write! ~ Lovely YOU!

Loving hugs and smiles,
Linda

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8 posted 2004-08-04 11:51 AM


Sue, this is so beautiful and so true!! It's going into my library...

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

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9 posted 2004-08-04 12:26 PM


much needed on a day like today when I don't really feel like it's a gift but a curse

thanks for reminding

Paul Wilson
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10 posted 2004-08-04 12:39 PM


Sue...Such positive words. If only we tried to do one good thing for a stranger each day how wonderful our world could be. Thanks for sharing...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

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