navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #33 » Take Flight
Open Poetry #33
Post A Reply Post New Topic Take Flight Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2004-08-03 08:11 PM



Take Flight





Emotions, stirring,

Storms will brew them, come what may,

Rousing those passions




Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?  Keeping in mind, I must stand close...

© Copyright 2004 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2004-08-03 08:13 PM


Very true...love this one Karilea.
Excellent.
Hugs~

~ Those who complain the sun has gone out of their world
       ....have obviously never danced in the rain ~

iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
2 posted 2004-08-03 08:14 PM


SIL - Oh, yes!  I feel it in the air!   ...jo
Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
3 posted 2004-08-03 09:05 PM


Stirring, yes.  

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
4 posted 2004-08-05 04:59 PM


LOL...I should have turned the picture upside down just for the heart of it...

Thank you for reading, poets!

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
5 posted 2004-08-08 09:55 PM


The skies are the infinite of freedom...
Sorry I missed this first time round...
soared!
TD

Duncan
Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455

6 posted 2004-08-08 10:06 PM


Thanks for the cloud ride Kari...  

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
7 posted 2004-08-09 01:48 AM



choshi
Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184
New York
8 posted 2004-08-09 02:06 AM


Fantastic image, strong poem....~P
ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
9 posted 2004-08-09 03:20 AM


So very very true....Nicely done with so little words.....

Eric

Ain't doin nothin at all
Just answerin the call
Kinda driftin away from it all~~~~~

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
10 posted 2004-08-09 07:24 AM


My passions took flight with this stirring post!

Angel 3
Linda

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

11 posted 2004-08-09 07:49 AM


smiling here...
and without the storms,
the sun could never shine through brighter
than before..

very well done me mum....

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
12 posted 2004-08-09 07:53 AM


Oh yes there is that heart ....I have recently seen such a heartshaped  "hole" in the clouds and felt it would have been nice to take a picture ...
well you have done it ...
and of course the accompanying words are PERFECT!
Love, Margherita

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #33 » Take Flight

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary