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Ericc
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0 posted 2004-08-03 02:29 PM



There is always distance
before a touch.

In the absence of
my body...

I would linger as the void
beneath your reach.

Constant in the faith of
offered flesh.


© Copyright 2004 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2004-08-03 02:35 PM


Love this Eric..love the word 'constant'.
Well done!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Those who complain the sun has gone out of their world
       ....have obviously never danced in the rain ~

Susan
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walking the surreal
2 posted 2004-08-03 02:37 PM


Sigh, sigh, simply lovely . . .

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

iliana
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3 posted 2004-08-03 02:42 PM


I envision your lovely words in a book of romantic verse entitled something like, "words of love" written on the page across the picture of a soft-lighted sensual scene of two lovers gazing at each other -- just beautiful, Eric.   ...jo
JL
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4 posted 2004-08-03 03:28 PM


Very nice.

JL


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5 posted 2004-08-03 03:32 PM


yes very nice


Decaflame
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6 posted 2004-08-03 04:06 PM


The title befits the verse,
and vice versa.

Enjoyed this, m'friend.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
7 posted 2004-08-03 04:23 PM


I am reaching
across distance ...
the souls' touch
echoes through
my flesh
and I rise
over your wholeness
as the sun rises
over Earth
in a life-giving
sacred embrace ...
in mutual surrender
we release
our vibrations of love
to the ever welcoming
womb of Universe.


Incredibly beautiful and stirring vision, dear Eric, Master of Love!
You always inspire ...
I love you.
Margherita

Janet Marie
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8 posted 2004-08-03 06:25 PM


In the absence of
my body...

I would linger as the void
beneath your reach.
==========================

*shaking me head*


time and time again I read you and say...

IWISHIHADWROTETHIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I would love to live as a river flows, carried by the surprise of its own unfolding.

~Fluent~
John O'Donohue

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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9 posted 2004-08-03 11:18 PM


Stunning
TD

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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Melbourne, Australia
10 posted 2004-08-03 11:26 PM


Hello Eric

I can see that you are still making all the women swoon with your beautiful words.

Take care.........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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