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Adonis Cross
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since 2003-04-07
Posts 46
Miami, FL, USA

0 posted 2004-08-03 09:55 AM


Before you waste a second's thought
Debating whether you will find
A girl who'll fall for you or not,
Allow me to relieve your mind.

Considering the way you speak
And think, the way you act and dress,
And ultimately, your physique,
The answer is a certain "yes".

Relax yourself, and banish all
Unnecessary mental strain—
A girl with half a brain would fall...
So find a girl with half a brain.


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Startime55
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since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada
1 posted 2004-08-03 10:22 AM


Oh my....the message is very clear...powerfully said...

iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
2 posted 2004-08-03 10:29 AM


Very cute and empowering poem for a certain young man!  Enjoyed!  
Adonis Cross
Junior Member
since 2003-04-07
Posts 46
Miami, FL, USA
3 posted 2004-08-03 10:31 AM


Empowering? Did you miss the barb?
passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2004-08-03 12:46 PM


good write...good to see you again
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