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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2004-08-03 12:40 PM


Do You Want Me

If there's someone you
desire more than me,
I'll just bow out
and say goodbye,
nice to know you
before I cry.
It's not fair
to me
to keep me
hoping
foolishly.
But if you do
honestly care for me,
you should decide
what's important to you
and respect me
accordingly.
You're all I want.
Do you want me?

JamesLee
August01
2004

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iliana
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1 posted 2004-08-03 01:45 AM


Oh, the love letters you write!  (I hope she does.) ....jo
passing shadows
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2 posted 2004-08-03 04:22 AM


she'd be crazy to want someone else
Foxyoasis
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3 posted 2004-08-03 04:49 AM


amen

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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4 posted 2004-08-03 08:59 AM


yes still the romantic


Enchantress
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5 posted 2004-08-03 09:01 AM


Good one James..
I'm sure she still wants you.
Hugs~

~ Those who complain the sun has gone out of their world
       ....have obviously never danced in the rain ~

Susan
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6 posted 2004-08-03 02:54 PM


Your heart is felt in this read . . .

Susan

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JL
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7 posted 2004-08-03 03:06 PM


Excellent write James Lee.

JL


JamesMichael
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8 posted 2004-10-24 12:53 PM


Thank each one of you for the lovely responses...James
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9 posted 2004-10-24 01:54 AM


exactly to what passing shadows said.


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