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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia 
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we were but could not have been because there was no were or was because there was only is third person singular present indicative but not singular because we were we but there was no we because there was only is no nouns and we is a pronoun and is is an indicative of be to be or not we were and there were no nouns or adjectives is was all |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Now that's a mind boggler -- to say the least. Sorry, there was no is.  ...jo |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Rebel "is was all" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
my mind is boggled  thanks for taking it elswhere tonight [This message has been edited by MGROVES (08-04-2004 04:33 AM).] |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"we were and there were no nouns or adjectives'  enjoyed!"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
hehehhehehhe, Incredibly funny...good one! I suppose that's one way one can side step an issue or responsiblity for another's feelings... |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"we were and there were no nouns or adjectives is was all" Wonderful write Reb..so much enjoyed the read. Hugs~ ~ Those who complain the sun has gone out of their world |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
we were and there were no nouns or adjectives is was all Yes, Reb, "we were" (with plenty of adjectives, though) and "we is" (with plenty of adjectives AND adverbs) LOL  Thank you, friend, for making me think!! Hugs, Ethel Hey, still wish I could write like you.... but I gotta THINK like you, first!! LOL |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
but I would rather be an "is" than a "was"... any day and I actually liked this lesson in life M |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Painfully beautiful...touches the heart... |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
but there was no we because there was only is no nouns and we is a pronoun not sure why but this makes perfect sense to me....good to read you my friend |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
We is certainly pleased with this.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Reb~ I am simply awed at the brilliance of this piece~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
for some reason, this makes perfect sense and Reb? thank you for your kind comment on my vintage wine write  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
The title made me smile... the poem made that fade in pain and understanding. *S* Ya done good, sweet nephew... to be or not we were And that past tense can be the hardest phrase to speak. *S* |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
*chuckling* but rubbing my head...this is how I think during my manic phases... ouch, but somehow it's less painful when you say it. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
all smiles |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
My poor, poor brain. |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Love it Local Rebel. Might be a mind boggler but still love it. :-) |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
enjoyed your version!  I've tried so hard to tell myself that you're gone though you're still with me |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
~ and we is the end all of be and was ~ or is it?!? lol A bit of a mind tickler!   EA |
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