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LeeJ
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0 posted 2004-08-02 12:59 PM


Secret powers defoliate well defined constellations
Encrypted atoms waiting to be digested
Giving tears to vulnerability, promise
Patience endures and looks well on me
Beauty’s highest destiny
Whispering a million tides
Lending attention to horizon’s melodic voice
Tendering violet night’s...thoughts
Wrap me in deep green
Somewhere there is a gathering of grandeur
Scented spice island dreams
Touching me with patient fingers
From great lakes of reflections, paintings
Embracing infinity...teaching me
The essence of stillness caresses
A polished bridge joining us where
Solitude wishes me
This freedom of will that resides inside
Can not be taken or easily given
Life is beyond all senses
Breathing me in, mystic 4th dimension
Where living surges around me
Playing with my toes, tickling my feet
Touché, I giggle while chasing soil
There, the only truth I need know
Is what contains me, sustains me
Holds me tenderly close
Transformation flying with the winds
Sighing into the ocean
Moistly transparent and shining
Knowing my all, both good and bad sides
And blends them in friendship
Without cause


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Martie
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1 posted 2004-08-02 03:05 PM


LeeJ

You are so deeply thoughtfilled!  

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2004-08-02 03:42 PM


LeeJ
I Hope so.


Margherita
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3 posted 2004-08-02 05:27 PM


It's as if you had a magician's hat, where you find incredible colors and feelings to  assemble masterfully.
Love, Margherita

iliana
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4 posted 2004-08-03 02:47 PM


"Patience endures and looks well on me
Beauty’s highest destiny"
&
Those last two lines -- WOW, special, special poem here, LeeJ.  Loved it.   ....jo

JL
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5 posted 2004-08-03 03:13 PM


"Transformation flying with the winds
Sighing into the ocean
Moistly transparent and shining
Knowing my all, both good and bad sides
And blends them in friendship
Without cause"

Beautiful!  Great write Lee J.

JL



nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
6 posted 2004-08-03 03:20 PM


Somewhere there is a gathering of grandeur
Scented spice island dreams
Touching me with patient fingers
From great lakes of reflections, paintings
Embracing infinity...teaching me
The essence of stillness caresses
A polished bridge joining us where
Solitude wishes me


so many good lines Lee, so much to think about...

M

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2004-08-03 06:40 PM


playing with toes
through my boots
using the hammer
to feel the sensations

and the sky says
be quiet I am sleeping

you weave some cool hooks here
enjoyed your eyes ms LeeJ

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