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A Chorus of Sorts
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A Chorus of Sorts |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Sometimes people throw things not caring where they land, whose head they smash after all pain is but perception misdirected, no one’s blame I wonder if they wonder if they’re the only ones, or if they know today their voices joined in angry chorus with others to make certain by nightfall a smashed head would seem a blessing |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I'd love to blame it on the moon baby, but I just can't in good conscious. and you have my mind reeling again, and I owe you an e and that DAMNED moon is so frigging distracting! whizzzzzzzzzzzzzz SMASH tinkle...OH heh heh?  *ahem* sorry...where were we?  (that was my way of agreement with yer poem yanno) *laughing* |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
hmmm, maybe get a hard hat? maybe the next time they'll accidentally throw a boomerang?  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Duncan, the images you pull out with this write are pretty frightening and that makes this a strong and thought-provoking write. and I have to go to bed now with this on my mind....no way. Think I'll go read one to sooth me down a bit.  .....jo |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I wonder if they wonder if they’re the only ones, ~*~ Sometimes it seems that way, when folks don't see the big picture... that we're all in this, together... You don't write enough...tell me about the bugs in your tomato garden... bugs are always good for a poem...  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
after all pain is but perception misdirected, no one’s blame I wonder if they wonder if they’re the only ones, or if they know today their voices joined in angry chorus with others ========================= me thinks it time for new tunes... a new band...new back up singers.. you can be the drummer.  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hmm! Let me see if I can come up with a plan to save some heads! Aha! I've got it! We should all put on our halos! lol  But just in case that doesn't work, keep your head on straight while everyone around you is losing theirs! EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Duncan Don't think there is a cure for that particular malady, LOL Good write. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
understanding this *nodding* |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
perhaps they don't know, because you cannot give something that you don't know? Good one |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"I wonder if they wonder if they’re the only ones, or if they know today their voices joined in angry chorus with others" .....Yup, tis true...good write Dunc. Now about those tomatoes...  Hugs~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Duncan~ A thought-provoking chorus~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
An angry chorus?? Sounds pretty special, it wasn't me, I swear!! But I can see how an honest explanation could be misinterpreted, simply because the truth hurts. I hope you didn't break anything Dunc. |
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