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Broken
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since 2000-03-12
Posts 271
The woods

0 posted 2004-08-01 10:58 PM



I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU

You make me feel
You make me see
What I could not
Sense before

Sweet bliss
You rain on me
And a blessing breeze
Guides our flying machine

Through skies of hope
And clouds of joy
I hope you find in me
The joy I found in you

You make me feel
Love

I love you
I love you
I love you

[This message has been edited by Broken (08-01-2004 11:47 PM).]

© Copyright 2004 Jay Hartson - All Rights Reserved
Ceinwyn
Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175
VA
1 posted 2004-08-01 11:10 PM


Whomever this is for is truly blessed with your sweet emotion and words...enjoyed...

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

miscellanea
Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060
OH
2 posted 2004-08-01 11:20 PM


Ah, to be in love... This is fresh like Spring! Enjoyed.
                miscellanea

Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
3 posted 2004-08-01 11:22 PM


Very nice -- heartfelt.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
4 posted 2004-08-02 01:36 AM


"I love you" ~ those three little words can move mountains!

~ and may they be said to you with as much depth of emotion!

A pleasure to read!

Love & Light,
EA

iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
5 posted 2004-08-02 03:53 AM


Broken, this was really sweet.  Someone must feel pretty special about now.  
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
6 posted 2004-08-03 02:18 AM


a flying machine...yes...nice thought
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