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Open Poetry #33
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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
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Atlantic Beach,Fla
0 posted 2004-08-01 08:30 PM


Summer love
how quck it grows

Summer love how
fast is unshowns

The face I seen
before has cease
to exhist from
my heart

In denial I try to
forgot how quickly
you can dismiss

We shared something you
say maybe is why I got
in to deep

Summer love full of
life and prospects
of happiness and
love of the dream
days of color lined
smiles of contentment

Drawls to the end as
the clouds fold away
in and fade to black

Winter has become and
love has not came back.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....
© Copyright 2004 Julie O'Neill - All Rights Reserved
whiskey
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since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278
Australia
1 posted 2004-08-01 08:35 PM

Nicely done, I think all love can be hard untill it's right we all wander looking.
Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla
2 posted 2004-08-01 08:37 PM

thanks

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....
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