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whiskey
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0 posted 2004-08-01 08:16 PM


Hey Honey
Do you know
The way I see you
Do you hear
The voice with which I long
Do you feel
These arms which need embrace
Do you see
These eyes looking upon
Do you want
The way I want you
Do you think
The way I think of you
Do you open
The way my soul is to yours
Do you need
The way I need you
Hey honey
Do you love
The way I love you ?

"Dont cry because its over, smile because it happened. "

© Copyright 2004 Julie Nelson - All Rights Reserved
Magnus
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1 posted 2004-08-01 08:31 PM


I hope he does...because you obviously do
love a ton worth of it of him....

Enchantress
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2 posted 2004-08-01 08:47 PM


Lovely piece full of such longing...
well done
Hugs~

~ I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before ~

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2004-08-01 09:34 PM



Sweet as honey!!! Enjoyed!

Huggums,
EA

Susan
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4 posted 2004-08-01 11:34 PM


I sure hope the feeling is returned.  These questions can plague one at times, wondering the answers.  Nicely said.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2004-08-03 12:36 PM


Hey honey...James
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6 posted 2004-08-03 01:05 AM


sassy

sultry

sublime

and... the poem is nice too

elfine
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7 posted 2004-08-03 10:06 PM


your poetry these past few days is full of such yearning ... the fact that the questions are left unanswered in the poems is both effective and almost wistful.  I hope there's someone out there answering them the way you deserve!  

-elfine

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