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0 posted 2004-08-01 07:26 PM



I think of you
And reason finds eclipse
By feelings much too powerful ellipse
That I would question my own sight
Making gray of black and white
I think of you
Paper hats and too tight terms
Equinox in passage squirms
And of the round about conceals
A distant hum in turn reveals
I think of you
And lean into this cardinal blush
Casper sheer the contents hush
A filigree of sterling clasp
To tapered edge of sunset gasp
I think of you

Copyright Kkh 8/1/04

© Copyright 2004 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-08-01 07:29 PM



Stand by the conviction...

Making gray of black and white

Don't!

Keep it
B&W

...but you'll do what is required...
whether fiction, or fantasy...



Hugs, Kathleen



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2 posted 2004-08-01 08:14 PM


Hello my friend and walking Webster's....
I wish I knew what to say of this...
Duhhhhh....I feel stupid...

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3 posted 2004-08-01 08:18 PM


Wow what a great write, very good indeed. Enjoyed
Susan
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4 posted 2004-08-01 11:41 PM



I think of you
And reason finds eclipse
By feelings much too powerful ellipse
That I would question my own sight

Ah, I know this.  Have you slipped into my skin?  Much enjoyed.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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5 posted 2004-08-01 11:50 PM


beautiful write K , smooth like silk
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