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Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29
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0 posted 2004-08-01 05:29 PM



Under the azure waves
of a pure-crested sky,
her hand turned a Blue Rose
over and over,
in taut circles.
She could see his smile
as he handed the Rose to her.
"Ah," he said, "This means
I am yours--heart and soul."
He had taken the thorns
from its slender stem,
so the Rose felt
smooth to the touch.
Her Blue Rose
...(marechal neil)
so blue and warm
speaking to her of:
his sure intentions.
She would fly her heart
into another Rose of blue
and hand one back to him
declaring, "I will be true."



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Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2004-08-01 05:58 PM


How delightfully romantic!
Love, Margherita

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2004-08-01 06:04 PM


So very beautiful...
enjoyed reading you again!
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2004-08-01 06:09 PM


I am seeing a continuance to
this romance, m'friend...
please...carry on!

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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4 posted 2004-08-01 06:24 PM


Ivy Rose, this was absolutely BEAUTIFUL!!  If you interested, here's my blue rose /pip/Forum83/HTML/003003.htmp
Magnus
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5 posted 2004-08-01 06:54 PM


Ivy,  welcome back....pleased to have you
here and with such a beautiful write of
a blue rose...Nicely done!

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