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Magnus
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0 posted 2004-08-01 11:50 AM


O willow bend thy slender bough
into the waters nigh.
Into the sunset harkening
beneath a summer’s skies.

O willow stand the timeless task
o’er shadows cool beside
the still clear pool of watering
where frogs and minnows hide.

And from thy branch of slenderness
shall not thy be a switch
to tame the maverick child of birth
born from a barber’s itch.

For willows sway the tender breeze
at dawn before the morn.
A time for dreams to pillow stay
as sheep are then twice shorn.



© Copyright 2004 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-08-01 12:06 PM


Pastoral in its beauty Barry.  I have often visited a spot just as you described in summertime.  

believe in what your heart feels...

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2 posted 2004-08-01 12:18 PM


Barry
This is excellent.

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3 posted 2004-08-01 12:22 PM


Very beautiful Barry...I think the willow has to be my favourite tree.
Hugs poet sir~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

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4 posted 2004-08-01 01:03 PM


Barry, I have a willow in my front yard and we had willows surrounding the pond on the farm in southwestern Ohio where I grew up.  This poem took me back to a time when a young girl sat on the banks of the pond making wishes and watching dragonflys sacrifice themselves to pond critters, skipping a stone or two and watching the circles as they edged out to capture me within their embrace.  Your poem pulled all that out.....beautiful!   ....jo
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5 posted 2004-08-01 01:24 PM


You had me from the word, Willow Beautiful!
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6 posted 2004-08-01 01:29 PM


Barry

The imagery is beautiful throughout, but I partiularly liked the switch in theme in this part:

"And from thy branch of slenderness
shall not thy be a switch
to tame the maverick child of birth
born from a barber’s itch."

Well done, dear man!  

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7 posted 2004-08-01 01:29 PM


Thy quill be made from willow for it sways thy mots with gracefulness across this sea of blue.


EA

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8 posted 2004-08-01 01:58 PM


This is very beautiful, it brought back memories for me too ... when the heat made it impossible to sleep and when just me and a willow's branch, which I used as a fan, watched the stars all night long ...
Love, Margherita

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9 posted 2004-08-01 11:02 PM


Your poetry also transported me under the willows by the pond.  It seemed to be the favorite spot of frogs and bass. There I always managed to get my line and bobber caught up in the willow!  Very beautiful, Magnus!  
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10 posted 2004-08-01 11:16 PM


It is a pleasure that upon my return from a weekend away I am able to read your beautiful words, and about my favorite tree.  I needed such beauty tonight, for I feel sadly empty.  Thank you for the gift.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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