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aujussy wolf
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0 posted 2004-08-01 10:03 AM



these windy breezes give me the sneezes
on late summer afternoons , watching balloons
fly away to there home in the sky
as i stand below waving goodbye


J.D Wolf III
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1 posted 2004-08-01 10:06 AM


cute LOL
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2 posted 2004-08-01 11:55 AM


Just once JW...just once I would like to grab hold of their string, and go see that home for myself.
Nice write...light, airy...Michiganish
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3 posted 2004-08-01 12:07 PM


Only Heaven knows how many baloons have
their home in the skies....Countless, I
would imagine.  Thanx for the light write,
so to speak...

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4 posted 2004-08-01 12:47 PM


and sometimes it just happens that way
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5 posted 2004-08-01 10:50 PM


soo right ....happy you liked it , lol cute is a good thing : ) ....peace to all
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