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0 posted 2004-08-01 09:16 AM





Perhaps, Perchance…

I find myself in the middle
In this place of where and when
Thinking that perhaps I’m little
And knowing I would go again;

Perhaps I slept too long this morn,
And missed the sun ray’s beam
I only know I saw you there
In the shadowy mists of dream…

I felt your fingers’ light caress
And knew the hold of you
I felt the kiss upon my face,
Saw footsteps left in dew;

Perhaps I slept too long this morn,
And missed the dawning light
I only know I saw you there
In the shadowy mists so white…

I saw me, and knew my form
But different in my view
While watching you look at me
As if you saw some clue;

Perhaps I slept too long this morn,
And missed long shadow’s kiss
I only know I saw you there
In the obscure bless of mist…

If perchance, I sleep again
And dream you come this night
Wake me up before the morn
And bless me with your sight…



©Karilea Rilling Jungel
2 February 2002





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1 posted 2004-08-01 09:24 AM


Perhaps, and not by chance you are the best romantic writer at Passions?
Perfectly beautiful..this really suits today's sunny Sunday morn.
It's a day for a daydream.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

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2 posted 2004-08-01 09:31 AM


Ahh, there are magical visions and encounters on the edge of the night .... and you expressed the wish of lingering so beautifully!
Much love, Margherita

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3 posted 2004-08-01 10:13 AM



Sounds as if you've dreamed an angel -- and sometimes such dreams do come true. I hope yours does!



~~J

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4 posted 2004-08-01 10:22 AM


Well Done KJ....I experienced this during
the night....so elusive the prize....one
that seems always a step beyond...

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5 posted 2004-08-01 10:28 AM


oh this is touching...got the shiiiivvvers LOL
sooo beautifully written..my little heart is beating harder ....

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6 posted 2004-08-01 10:46 AM


nice read
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7 posted 2004-08-01 01:09 PM


Sunshine, oh, how elusive are the visions given to us sometimes....you say it so well....the longing to grasp it before it disappears.....beautiful penning!   ....jo
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8 posted 2004-08-01 01:18 PM


Karilea, I loved it! Every little bit of it!
I know whereof you so whimsically, magically and lyrically speak!

Love & Light in the Night!

Linda

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9 posted 2004-08-01 04:09 PM


Ah, the first day of August and you gift us with such beautiful words! Thankyou for this Karilea. hugs, Chrislane

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."


— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet

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10 posted 2004-08-01 05:38 PM


Sweet!


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