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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2004-08-01 04:39 AM


My Devoted Love


If I didn't miss her
then I would be worried,
for I have told her
that she is the only
one that I want,
and I have told her
that I love her.
So in this case
missing is not
a burden, it is
a confirmation of
my devoted love.


JamesLee
August01
2004

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Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2004-08-01 04:44 AM


Yes .... there is that sweet longing that hurts, but how strong the connection just in those moments!
Beautiful, dear James.
Love, Margherita

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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2 posted 2004-08-01 04:45 AM


Good.  Now we're back on track.....enjoyed.  *smile*......jo
scorpio
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right...there
3 posted 2004-08-01 08:47 AM


Well done James.  

believe in what your heart feels...

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2004-08-01 09:05 AM


Smiling here, James...
JamesMichael
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5 posted 2004-08-03 12:09 PM


Thank you Margherita, iliana, scorpio and Sunshine for the nice responses...James
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