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~K~
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0 posted 2004-08-01 04:10 AM


Yes, You
the person
reading these words
I have something for you
for you and
only you
What I have
is this
this linguistic bridge
from which
I'm begging
you to tell me
who can you be

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-08-01 04:13 AM


that's a good thought...

honestly, I can't answer that right now though

~K~
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2 posted 2004-08-01 04:21 AM


Right Now

I'm ready to
answer to
nothing
it's the
hand
I'm holding
poetry
with no strings
still sings

iliana
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3 posted 2004-08-01 04:42 AM


Good write.  Right now, I am one sleepy mama.  Thanks for asking.  
serenity blaze
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4 posted 2004-08-01 06:14 AM


"I am he as you are he as you are me and we are all together...

goo goo a'joob."

--"I Am The Walrus"
  Lennon/McCartney

Enjoyed.

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5 posted 2004-08-01 09:04 AM


LOL@ Serenity's response

Who am I?

muted, diverted, interupted
interested
yet still unaware

ThisDiamond
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6 posted 2004-08-01 09:11 AM


If I am reading your words...then I am the missing part
Wonderful write
TD

Juju
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7 posted 2004-08-01 02:43 PM


Who am I?  I am a girl head over heals for a guy she will never see again and waist high in expectations, while trying to question a soiciety or two, when no one else will.

Good write I will look forward to your suff..


Juju

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8 posted 2004-08-01 11:52 PM



Interesting.
I think I've concluded for now that I am many. Give me many years, and I will have a better answer for you.

~Broken~

"Base not your joy upon the deeds of others, for what is given can be taken away."

Peter Steele

~K~
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9 posted 2004-08-03 05:07 AM


Wow! That was great! I loved all of your responses...thank you.
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