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Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
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0 posted 2004-07-31 09:03 PM

This cumbersome moon,
shouldering the stars aside:
where now the lovers?

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2004-07-31 09:10 PM

So wistful. enjoyed......jo

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2004-07-31 09:13 PM

Ed

I think they may hide in the shadows that such a moon makes.

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

3 posted 2004-08-01 05:30 PM

Thanks.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2004-08-01 05:45 PM

Ed~
Basking in the glow of your poeticism~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2004-08-01 05:55 PM

funny coincidence ..... icebox knows!

While you guys wrote about the moon, I was out taking pictures of it, spectacular vision!

Beautiful.
Love, Margherita

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2004-08-01 06:03 PM

Looking into a
dark midnight river, Moon sees
no one but herself.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

7 posted 2004-08-04 02:16 PM

Wrapped in wish. *S*

I was traveling this weekend and had to pull over so I could watch the moon without the risk of getting too cosy with someone's bumper. *G*

I continued filled with both admiration and loneliness... I'd much rather have been filled with great poetry such as this! *S* Excellent!

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

8 posted 2004-08-04 03:23 PM

good question

Elan
Member

since 2002-05-03

Posts 382
State of Wide Eye

9 posted 2004-08-04 03:26 PM

Ah, they slept under stars and
found themselves awakening
to the first blush
of dawn.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

10 posted 2004-08-04 06:14 PM

Oh they're out there, somewhere.

Nice one Mr Rat

Mxx

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

11 posted 2004-08-04 06:50 PM

nicely done Sir...

I've read most if not all you offered here..and you do well in both the short form as well as those that are longer.. enjoyed them all I think...

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

12 posted 2004-08-04 07:03 PM

enjoyed

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