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Ericc
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0 posted 2004-07-31 02:07 PM



Everything we
taste...

Delights in momentary
contact.

Feel the night pass sweet
against the lips.

This kiss...so full in its
desire -

We meet the world on lips that
part to the grace of what
the moment offers.

Everything we
taste...

Dissolves in the pleasure of
this passage.

© Copyright 2004 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
Juju
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In your dreams
1 posted 2004-07-31 02:26 PM


I liked the flow

Juju

Susan
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walking the surreal
2 posted 2004-07-31 02:49 PM


Oh yes, reading you is like catching a ride on a moon beam, sheer beauty.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

iliana
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3 posted 2004-07-31 04:37 PM


  So true.  So beautifully put!
Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2004-07-31 04:41 PM


Ericc
One could say that. Enjoyed

Tiersdin
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5 posted 2004-07-31 04:44 PM


Definitely a moment to be cherished.

Lovely, Eric...

~tier

ThisDiamond
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6 posted 2004-07-31 05:05 PM


And all to be savored.
TD

Sunshine
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7 posted 2004-07-31 05:17 PM


Well if this doesn't wet one's whistle...

Well done, Sir!

Margherita
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8 posted 2004-07-31 06:48 PM


Dear Eric, you sharpen my awareness with your beautiful words and I taste this moment of the night to the fullest ....it holds love.... a momentary caress, like a drop of honey tasting so sweet and nurturing deeply ...
I love you.
Margherita

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displaced
9 posted 2004-08-01 04:08 AM


awesome
Magnus
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10 posted 2004-08-01 12:11 PM


Eric,  you are a master of the short though
fantastic....  May your pen never dry of
such words you give to us.

Enchantress
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11 posted 2004-08-01 01:30 PM


Beautiful Eric...a wonderful write!
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

cinnamongirl
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12 posted 2004-08-01 01:56 PM


Aaahhh... what sweet, sensual imagery in magic poetry.

I love it!!

I love you,

Moca

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13 posted 2004-08-03 07:59 AM


wow


nakdthoughts
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14 posted 2004-08-03 09:56 AM


Most definitely
*s
M

garysgirl
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15 posted 2004-08-03 09:59 AM


We meet the world on lips that
part to the grace of what
the moment offers.

Everything we
taste...

Dissolves in the pleasure of
this passage.


Ummmm....sounds like quite a kiss, dear Eric!!
Hugs,
Ethel


Startime55
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16 posted 2004-08-03 10:21 AM


Sensually beautiful...

miscellanea
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17 posted 2004-08-03 01:03 PM


I always enjoy spending a moment reading your poetry.  No matter what mood I'm in, it transports me to a peaceful one, filled with a smile.  You're a gem.  Thanks, Eric.
                 miscellanea

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