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aujussy wolf
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0 posted 2004-07-31 10:26 AM



creatures of the night and day
progression is hard to let happen
when things are allowed to go there own course
to prosper into the light of show time
the limes lite of renewal
a rebirth of the soul , the reoccurring
a second chance ... golden with sight
returned to love
to our own laughter
soothed with comfort and compromise
yet with rest and recuperation
life shines on forever eternal


J Wolf III
7-31-04

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Susan
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1 posted 2004-07-31 10:44 AM


very nice . . .   Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

aujussy wolf
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2 posted 2004-07-31 11:02 AM


thanks sue
, wolfy

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2004-07-31 11:17 AM


aujussy wolf
Interesting, enjoyed the read.

passing shadows
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4 posted 2004-07-31 12:41 PM


I pretty much let things go their own way because I figure there's a plan, or will be eventually

I like this write here wolfy

ThisDiamond
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5 posted 2004-07-31 05:07 PM


Progression is hard to let happen,
especially the exciting kind  
Wise and uplifting observations
Well done.
TD

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6 posted 2004-07-31 06:00 PM


Nice writing.......enjoyed.   ....jo
Margherita
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7 posted 2004-07-31 07:26 PM


And eternally we ponder .... and you do it beautifully.
Love, Margherita

aujussy wolf
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8 posted 2004-07-31 08:07 PM


great to hear from all of ya ... it gave me a good feeling , happy full moon tonight ...howllll
ice
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9 posted 2004-07-31 08:10 PM


Wolf...
excellent verse, full of wisdom,
enjoyed
--------ice
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10 posted 2004-08-01 12:50 PM


always good to see you grace these pages with your words.... you should stick around more!

I've tried so hard to tell myself that you're gone though you're still with me
I've been alone all along..Now I'm bound by the life you left behind

aujussy wolf
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11 posted 2004-08-01 09:40 AM


sooo sweet ... i think i better take my coat off too ..lol ,, thanks for the chatter
woof

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