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Lady In White
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0 posted 2004-07-30 09:50 PM



Blue Moon's Phrase Phase

Long since the moon hast come and gone
Memories have embraced shadows of recall
Swallowing them in dark night skies
As phasing hast become me.

Ah, but this month, ah, this,
Dwells twice memories, so blue of moon
That shades my shadows, and my bliss
This phasing that 'twould be me.

And therein lies the brightness, blued
An addiction that my heart doest follow
Delighting in softness of memories,
Of he, the one who joins to bridge desires.

For heart’s desires, they know me well,
Binding mind to feet, in step of time,
Guiding fate, which paves my path
For twice!Desires shall moon this month.

Sailing the skies, bending to breeze, to think ~
A Lady in love, sprawling words for all to see,
Unexpected, this light to find behind those clouds
That blues the moon twice for she.

And in my heart, this she is me,
My heart beats twice in time to rhyme
Of ocean’s roar, or streams that seem
To glisten wildly on this night’s shore.

~*~

So, time shall freeze the moments when
A prism of blue will kiss the night, and
Blending, We, with our thoughts of He,
Memories, of Lady Ollyne, and Lady in White.

© Copyright 2004 Lady In White - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-07-30 09:58 PM


"So, time shall freeze the moments when
A prism of blue will kiss the night, and
Blending, We, with our thoughts of He,
Memories, of Lady Ollyne, and Lady in White."


Brava!! Brava!!  What a beautiful treat!
Two of Passions most talented Ladies..
blending their voices in tribute to the blue moon of July.
Excellent write..well done ..hugs to you both!

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2 posted 2004-07-30 10:31 PM


my my my...what a lovely lovely two step this is...

wonderful lacing of words and imagey ladies.

love--a--leeeeeeee

I would love to live as a river flows, carried by the surprise of its own unfolding.

~Fluent~
John O'Donohue

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3 posted 2004-07-30 10:45 PM


Tis' a beautiful blending it is!
Brava ladies! hugs, Chris

Tim
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4 posted 2004-07-30 11:05 PM


Hand in hand they stroll the paths
of heaven's unseen treasures,
Amid the grandeur of the skies,
ensconced in welkin pleasures,
They hap' upon a blue of moon,
and savor of its glow,
Then send a wee bit back to earth,
to we mortals here below.

A pleasure to experience the gift of your penning fair ladies. Thank you for letting us partake of your poetic offering.


Martie
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5 posted 2004-07-30 11:11 PM


Oh so lovely you both are...thank you for this treat!
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6 posted 2004-07-31 03:13 PM


There is so much to love about this,
but these lines are striking and so very beautiful.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Dwells twice memories, so blue of moon
That shades my shadows, and my bliss
This phasing that 'twould be me.

And therein lies the brightness, blued
An addiction that my heart doest follow
Delighting in softness of memories,
Of he, the one who joins to bridge desires.

For heart’s desires, they know me well,

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Tonight's the night and it couldn't be lovelier than this,  truly.

Absolutely stunning poetry you two.

iliana
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7 posted 2004-07-31 03:18 PM


Stunningly lovely!  We've a clear day here in Houston, hope to see it tonight.
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8 posted 2004-07-31 03:40 PM


LadyM~ & MadameK~
This is just a beautiful blend of gorgeous phrases so artistically phased~

Much admiration~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

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9 posted 2004-07-31 05:01 PM


lovely write from you two
Margherita
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10 posted 2004-07-31 07:24 PM


Dear Ladies, you are beautifully moon-tuned!
Love, Margherita

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11 posted 2004-07-31 08:40 PM


You do the moon justise

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

JamesMichael
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12 posted 2004-08-01 04:48 AM


Enjoyed...James
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13 posted 2004-08-01 11:19 AM


Penned exceptionally well by two of Passion's
finest ladies....  Well done to you both on
this moneth of two blues in the clear night
skies.

scorpio
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14 posted 2004-08-01 12:09 PM


I hope this isn't a once in a "blue moon" joining of talents.  More..please.

believe in what your heart feels...

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15 posted 2004-08-01 07:46 PM


very nice ladys,
softly smiling here.
very nice indeed....

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16 posted 2004-08-03 05:31 PM


well I guess I have to give thanks to a special Lady for sharing  her thoughts
M

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17 posted 2004-08-03 07:52 PM


Thank you for keeping me straight, kind Lady.
Methinks the heat hast gone to this one's head

And I thank all of those Knights and Ladies who have taken the time to share our words~~

Ollyne

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